Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder
I would like for this paper to be rewritten as guided by my instructor’s feedback in response to my first draft, which are as follows:”I am still having difficulty identifying what the clear trend is. What has changed in this area in the last 10 years? Until that is identified, the causes and consequences are tied more to ADHD in general instead of a trend (a change). Right now your essay points to a lack, not a trend. Make sure to include a clear thesis that names the trend, the causes or consequences of that trend, and your judgment on the trend. When writing about your causes or consequences, they should be causes or consequences of the actual trend. Make the connections clear. How did the trend lead to these problems? Be specific and prove your points. Please review the rubric, the essay description”.I have attached the paper I would like help with, the assignment instructions and the rubric.If it needs completely redone I am okay with that and prepared to meet whatever the writer may need from me to do that.